Looking for constructive criticism on a video I made

[deerhuntinghippie]

I thought it was very good! As others have said, the guitar was a bit loud but I loved your voice. To me, the tone and the volume fit perfectly with the story you were telling. It really made me pay attention and reflect on what you were saying. You can always go back and reshoot scenes if you think they are jumpy or just don't quite fit. You are an artist and a poet sir and I congratulate you. Takes a lot of guts to put your stuff out for others to critique. I hope you do more projects that you will share.

I really appreciate that. Thanks so much for watching and commenting.
I can't lie, it was a bit intimidating deciding to post this online. But surprisingly I haven't had too much negativity. Sure, I've gotten criticism but that was what I wanted but there hasn't been a lot of just flat out negativity, which shocked me because the internet can be a very dark place. I think it says a lot about the outdoor community.
I'm glad you enjoyed the writing. I've been working hard at my writing for a very long time so it always feels good when something I write can resonates within someone.
Thanks so much.

 

[NY63]

I really appreciate that. Thanks so much for watching and commenting.
I can't lie, it was a bit intimidating deciding to post this online. But surprisingly I haven't had too much negativity. Sure, I've gotten criticism but that was what I wanted but there hasn't been a lot of just flat out negativity, which shocked me because the internet can be a very dark place. I think it says a lot about the outdoor community.
I'm glad you enjoyed the writing. I've been working hard at my writing for a very long time so it always feels good when something I write can resonates within someone.
Thanks so much.

Want some negativity? I thought the acting on the part of the squirrel lacked authenticity. Ha! Good job Zachary and Amanda.

 

[deerhuntinghippie]

I like the low whisper, it has a soothing sound. But, I definitely missed a few words. Would it be possible to have a disappearing text on the screen with the words? I know they are in the description, but you cant read that and watch the video at the same time. Done tastefully, I think it can be something that can help convey your words to the watcher without having to raise the volume of your voice.

The disappearing text would have been a good idea. I have After Affects but I have no idea how to use it yet.
Thanks so much for the compliment and for watching!

 

[deerhuntinghippie]

Want some negativity? I thought the acting on the part of the squirrel lacked authenticity. Ha! Good job Zachary and Amanda.

I can see that.
Thanks for watching man!

 

[Big Ben]

Enjoyed watching. No suggestions b/c I could never do this myself.

 

[cskiles]

Really nice work! I have no experience with cinematography but it looked very professional and well done.

 

[rayk63]

I have no experience in perfecting a video but I really enjoyed this one. I can relate to its content.
Look forward to the next

 

[deerhuntinghippie]

Enjoyed watching. No suggestions b/c I could never do this myself.

I really appreciate that guys!

Really nice work! I have no experience with cinematography but it looked very professional and well done.

I have no experience in perfecting a video but I really enjoyed this one. I can relate to its content.
Look forward to the next