Senate Bill 49 - Repealing Stand Your Ground

[Laufen]

You may be right, a democrat can have a hard time with interpretation.

No, I'm being serious. Submit it for proofreading first. If you want to make a point, do it in a way that you'll be taken seriously.

 

[chucklenut]

This bill does not affect your right to bear arms.

i havent had a chance to read the thing entirely, but it looks like it wants to repeal or amend alot of the language regarding using a gun in defense of self or others

Aka make it easier to prosecute lawful gun owners who use their firearm in self defense

Just my initial take

 

[MRH]

No, I'm being serious. Submit it for proofreading first. If you want to make a point, do it in a way that you'll be taken seriously.

Was it that bad?

 

[Laufen]

Was it that bad?

It was loaded with grammatical and spelling errors. When sending that type of email/letter, the intent is for your opinion to be taken seriously. That's an uphill battle if the text is loaded with errors. It will end up looking like you didn't put much thought into the response. Just put it up here for a quick critique first, and don't take corrections personally.

 

[MRH]

Give me one example of a spelling error..Grammatical maybe..I'm no English major.

 

[chucklenut]

Was it that bad?

No, but it makes reference to other provisions and codes, so to understand it completely id need those to read as a reference

Its pretty short and specific

 

[MRH]

No, but it makes reference to other provisions and codes, so to understand it completely id need those to read as a reference

Its pretty short and specific

Perhaps, but that is not what he was talking about.

 

[chucklenut]

Perhaps, but that is not what he was talking about.

Im just a simple georgia boy

I still count on my fingers

 

[Laufen]

Give me one example of a spelling error..Grammatical maybe..I'm no English major.

The very first sentence "Not exactly certain." You needed a subject..."*I'm* not exactly certain" Anyway, there were many more. Just toss it up here first.
Right or wrong, poorly constructed emails will get dismissed out of hand.

 

[MRH]

Im just a simple georgia boy

I still count on my fingers

The very first sentence "Not exactly certain." You needed a subject..."*I'm* not exactly certain" Anyway, there were many more. Just toss it up here first.
Right or wrong, poorly constructed emails will get dismissed out of hand.

I did not misspell one word. Sorry I did not add "I'm", but "I'm" hopeful that even a democrat will have the ability to interpret what it says...Of course that is wishful thinking. I'll bet they take my vote seriously on election day, no matter my grammatical errors.