The effort you put into clearly expressing your opinions matters. i was simply offering free assistance in making sure his voice was heard, and respected.
Also, attacking someone or their party in an email that is meant to persuade someone, is a surefire way to make sure it doesn't.
I appreciate you pointing out the mistakes. That's why I asked if it was really that bad...I'm well aware my sentence structure is far from perfect. Believe it or not I was 4th grade spelling bee champ at Beulah elementary school. Yeah, you can only imagine the dumb asses at Beulah.
I cannot help pointing out the man's political party. They are the ones constantly attacking my rights as a free citizen.